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« on: September 27, 2008, 02:21:29 PM » |
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I was bored, so I made this.
Prolouge Location:Geonosis Date:? Time:? My squad and I were going down deep. Deep into the tunnels. Fierfek. These tunnels are huge. I thought. I am RC 3001. First of my kind. I am under an advanced legion of clones called the S.T.A.R Force. Special Tactical And Recon. We were the most secret ever. We were trained by Roba Fett, Jango's brother, secretly. We were trained to be better then an arc trooper. We were separated into 3 groups. The General Infantry, The Amateurs, and the Elites. Five Elites are better than a 20 man arc squad. We were genetically engineered not to a age. We are all stuck at 20. That is, until we get killed by one of those clankers. Any way, like I said, we were fast roping down, down deep. We hit the floor were 20 droids were waiting for us. My squad and Alpha squad fired. Hunter was hacking and slashing with his vibro blade. Deow! Deow! 10 droids left! I thought. FUSHUNKK. The door opened and more droids spilled in. "Go go go!!" Orcious, the leader of Alpha squad, yelled. A few privates went in. Stupid arcs. Couldn't they tell something was in there? "Wait!" I shouted. But I was to late. The privates flew out. "Aieegh!" They hit the ground stone hard. A hole through their chests. "Hand Ion cannon. This was a SSBD," Flamer, my analyst reported. "SSBD?" Orcious questioned. "A Super Super Battle Droid," I said, "they are the worst droids anyone could in counter. "They have arm Ion cannons, wrist homing rockets, turbo lasers, flame throwers, and the works," Flamer continued, "we'll have to proceed with caution." We quietly entered the door. Hunter tossed in a grenade. BOOM! A piece of reinforced armor plating came in. " Oh yeah, reinforced armor plating. I forgot about that." I sighed. I took a detpack and tossed it in. I pressed the button on the detonator. BOOM! A droid flew out. "Stupid meat bags," I heard a robotic voice say. Fierfek, there are about five in there. " Mecha I'll need your mini flame thrower," I ordered," and Orcious I hpe one of your arcs have a missle launcher.
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« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 04:20:54 PM » |
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Mecha and I stood near the entrance along with one of Orcious's men. Mecha was holding his 45 caliber chain gun and I had his flamethrower on my back. The arc had a grade A republic missile launcher. "3...2...1... FIRE!" I ordered. A defining blast filled the room. With a blinding flash of light from one of hunters flash bangs, my squad entered the room with Orcious's squad covering out flank. My helmet filter filtered out the light. "HOLY SH*T!" I heard an arc yell. We were in a room with were 5 fully armed super super battle droids.Fierfek. My men went flat on the dirt walls. Suddenly, the geonosin sand rumbled beneath us. "Mecha plant a explosive on that door!" I ordered, pointing to a door that read "No Entry" "Yes sir," He set to work. My men covered the Mecha. "Charge set sir." "EVERYONE CLEAR!" I shouted. Mecha, Hunter, and Flamer dived out of the way. I flipped the switch. A blinding light filled the room, but it wasn't another of Hunters flash bangs. It wasn't a droid's either. A clanker's would've been filtered. It was a trandoshan's. Orcious had gone through the door. "SITHSPIT IT'S A TRANDOHAM!! He yelled. My men ran in to help. I did too, but I was too late. It was a trandoham, it was trandohams. My men were mowed down by the trandoshans. I knew this was the end. My men died, now I will meet them.What green ugly sons of a - Then, the room caved in, squishing the trandoshans and ruining my thoughts. The same happened to the room behind me. A republic gunship had come.
My squad was gone. It hurt to think about it. But it was the only thing to think about.
so that concludes Issue one!
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« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 06:05:47 PM » |
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Wait that was the prologue. NOW issue one.
Chapter 1. Theta Squad Location: The Republic Venator Assualt Ship, The Triumphant Date:They have dates in Star Wars? Any way, Day 3(I just start the dates after the battle of Geonosis Time:morning
It was my second day on the Triumphant. I had never seen anything more majestic. I have only been on the republic frigates. Today I was going to be assigned a new squad. I didn't want a new squad. I didn't want anyone to replace my fallen brothers. I went any way. My room was Theta. I walked past the "shinies" or new clones. They were deep in talk. Sometimes I wonder what the purpose of us is. I looked down at my helmet. Even thought I had just polished it, it still wore the scars of the battle on Geonosis. It was mostly dark blue. It had the marks of Jaig eyes, the markings of bravery. The "T" Visor was outlined with blue and so was the blade. I walked past the cafeteria, were clones were busy eating, talking, and laughing. I finally arrived at a door that read "Theta". I opened the door and a Clone looked up from his equipment.
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« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2008, 07:32:35 PM » |
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Chapter 1. Theta Squad Location: The Republic Venator Assualt Ship, The Triumphant-Room Theta Date:Day 3 Time:late morning
He was sitting next to a bed. The sign read: Rc 3067 Kydeki He was polishing his armor which had cyan flames. His helmet was on the floor, showing his whit hair and red eyes. He did in fact, have battle scars and dents on his helmet, but it didn't bore the Jaig eyes I had received. I looked around the room before speaking. I was like the rooms in Kamino, all white with a black striped through the middle all around the room. It had white tile floors too. There were four beds. Each with metal storage compartments. "Sarge?" He said. Of course. I thought.I'm the commander again. "Yes?" I asked "I'm Kydeki" Kydeki reported. "Yes I know, I am Darkrangr. You can call me DR for short" I replied "Okay darky. What's with your hair?" Yes my hair is different then most clones. Most have Jango's features but my eyes were more innocent(in clone years we're 20 but in reality, were 10 and stuck at 10) and my hair reached down to my hazel eyes. "There was a DNA mess up," I explained,"Roba Fett was visiting our facility. He accidentally got his hair into my molecules." "That happened to me too.Did his blood get in yours?" "I guess," I replied,"So what's your class?" "Heavy weapons. My flame thrower is in this bin here," he said, tapping one of the bins under his bed,"I'm also the strategist, I inherited that from Roba." "Really? I got his sarcastically optimistic personality and his stealth abilities..." "Cool"
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« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 05:39:16 PM » |
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Chapter 1. Theta Squad Location: The Republic Venator Assualt Ship, The Triumphant-Room Theta Date:Day 3 Time:afternoon
I laid down on my bed. They were white and fuzzy. Just how I liked it. SLISSSH. The door slid open. Another clone trooper came in. His armor was different then any armor that I had ever seen. It was like our armor, except that it had a maroon mask instead of our helmets. Like I said, the helmet was painted maroon and the body too. The mask was like one of the senate guards, having a point on the bottom and a flat top, covering the armor. The point was red and the top was maroon. The rest was white. He walked to a bed before speaking. The sign read Rc3021 Betin "Hello sarge," Betin said,he seemed to have a pretty high voice,"Kydeki." We saluted back. "So your our demolitions expert?" I asked. "Right you are Ranger!" He replied. "Were is the last person, Talon?" Kydeki asked. "I heard he had to go to the medical facility," I said, "We should go and eat, Talon we'll come."
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« Reply #5 on: October 07, 2008, 08:13:26 PM » |
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Chapter 2. The mission Location: The Republic Venator Assualt Ship, The Triumphant Date:who cares?no one reads this Time:or this! We walked down to the dining hall. The sweet scents of food greeted him. On the field, they had those tasteless military rations, here, they had better things. Something called bread and soup. It tasted way better than the rations. We took a tray and filled our plates. We sat down at the table who's sign read "Theta" We sat down. It felt so glad to be back. War was very harsh, eating dried ration cubes and having to see your allies die. Especially my squad. The chicken they were serving today smelled so good. We all dug in. It tasted so good. The door opened and everyone looked up. A clone holding a blackened helmet came in. The helmet was different than ours. It was all round with a straight blade, instead, it had a round blade that instead of running a small bit of the helmet, went the full length of the helmet. Instead of being round, there were round pipe-looking things sticking out. He also had some black markings on his helmet. He had a scar across his face. This I knew, was Talon. He had the same armor as us, it had the dents, and scars. The armor was painted mostly black. He went up to out table and said, "Hello I'm Talon," He had a deep and rough voice. He walked away to get some food. Kydeki, Betin, and I talked. Then the question came up, "What happened to your squad?" Betin asked Talon. "None of your business," He replied. Another time, a really good joke came up(I mean really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really, really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really, good), Talon didn't even crack a smile. This guy is pretty serious. I thought. This is gonna be a pretty hard squad.
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« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2008, 07:38:54 PM » |
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When we were finished, we walked back to out room. When the door slid open. A clone trooper in plain armor was sitting on a bench. "Hello my name is advisor 35," The clone said, "You, Theta squad, have a mission. The planet Borgoron II is under attack. The Borgs are a weak species." Advisor 35 took out a small disk. A holo-reader. He turned it on. A bright blue light came out of it, static at first but it soon turned out to be a holomap of Borgoron II. I was breathless. It was so snowy. There were so many lakes and there were some forests. I looked at the northwest part of the map and I saw a big grey building. It had turrets on top of it and I saw little specks coming out. I leaned closer.Battle droids. I thought. "That," Advisor 35 said, pointing at the building, "is the droid's base. It is a large fortress. There are security cameras and heavily armed guards" "SSBDs?" Betin asked nervously. "Precisely," 35 replied, "Don't worry, there are regular droids too. Some doors have a SSBD guarding it though." Betin seemed relieved."As I was saying, the separatists seem to have some advanced droid plans. you need to get those files." Advisor 35 touched the droid base on the building. It showed a map of the fort. He pointed too a room at the very top. "It is right in there. Careful, it is said to be guarded by the SSBDs and Trandohams." The mention of those two words stirred anger in me. My nails dug into my skin. Kydeki seemed to notice and he gave me a little smile that calmed me down. "You must miss your squad," Kydeki whispered. "Yeah...." My voice faded. "Any questions?" Advisor 35 asked briskly, "no, ok then, pack your bags, you'll be leaving soon." He started to go out the door. "Oh by the way, I'll be with giving you intelligence over the radio." And Advisor 35 walked out the door.
We started packing our bags. Rations in first layer, attachments in the second, bacta tanks in the 3rd.... Then my thoughts were interrupted. "Hey Talon, what's with you're armor?" Kydeki asked. "It's a prototype of the phase 2 armor," Talon replied. "Really? That's cool," Betin said. He stared at his armor in envy. "Well it's got it's share of the bugs...." Talon said. All of a sudden, the Holo projector burst to life. It showed Advisor 35, he was leaning on a wall of a gunship. "Theta Squad get down here, your departure is in 5 minutes," He said. "Roger that," I replied, turning the holo projector out. "You heard him gents, let's move it."
We stepped into the hangar, backpacks on our backs and some demolition ordnance. Advisor 35 signaled to us, to a republic gunship with only one cockpit. It was meant for infantry transportation through space. We boarded our gunship and we went down to Borgoron.
Chapter 3:Planet Fall Location:Borgoron Date:Day 1 Time:Night
The ride to Borgoron was through an asteroid field. I hated it. It was like this: Swerve up, swerve down, up, down, side, side, up, and all those other directions. I felt like I was going to barf in my armor! We finally entered the atmosphere. Phew is it rainy. I thought. Wow these rains are just like Kamino's. All of a sudden, a beam of light went past us.Fierfek, it's an anit-aircraft! BLAM! Another came. BLAM! And another! I could tell the pilot was doing his best. It was like the asteroid field again! BLAM! WHIZZZ SLICE! A missle had got out engine! We started to descend down to the dark forest. "We'll have to jump!" Betin yelled over the howling wind. "3..." I started counting. "You're crazy!"Talon shouted. "2....."I continued. "We'll get lost!" "1..." "WHY WON'T YOU LISTEN TO ME!!!!!" Talon roared. But it was to late. We all were falling to the darkness. I saw Kydeki beside me. I tried to grab him but I was late. I was blown away by the winds.
WHOOSH! Kydeki was blown away from Darkranger. Fierfek. He thought. Now I'm in some dumb forest, away from my squad and completely stranded. Then Kydeki spotted it. A CIS comm tower. If he could get there then he could contact his squad. WHUMP! He slammed through the leaves and onto a tree branch. Oh gosh my back! Fortunately, he fell in a bunch of shrubs, cushioning his fall. He got up and looked around. His night vision illuminated the area. He was waist deep in shrubs, surrounded by trees. Survival tactics. He thought. Secure the area, if there are enemies, get away, if they know your there then they'll raise defenses. He crouched low in the shrubs, looking around. It took him five minutes to confirm, nothing out there. Step 2: Set up camp. He used his vibro blade to cut some shrubs, making a small clearing. He took a ration out of his pack. Only one day with the good food.... He thought. He he hated the food. Even so, he forced in the food. When it was empty, he put it back down. He decided to put probes around the area. Being the strategist, he had some around. He took two out and sent them into the world.
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« Reply #7 on: November 05, 2008, 07:12:46 PM » |
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Talon was falling. It was a strange sensation, for he had never fallen 20 feet down toward a forest. He looked over to his sides and saw Betin. Great I'm stuck with the nice guy.... He thought. He reached for Betin. Better to be with a teammate then by yourself... He grabbed Betin and they both descended down to the dark forests.
WHUMP! They both fell face flat in the dirt. Oh god my back. Betin thought. He slowly got up. DEOW!Just then, a crmison red laser bolt flew past him. He quickly flattened him self on the dirt. "What was that?" Asked Talon, who was recovering from the fall. He was talking in the silent radio. "What do you think it was," Replied Betin, "droids!" He crawled toward a bush. "Come on!" He said to Talon. Talon scrambled toward him. Betin looked around him. He was in a forest with trees so high he could hardly see light even though it was bright morning. DEOW DEOW DEOW DEOW DEOW! The sound of blaster bolts came again and reminded Betin that there were droids in the area. "Anti-armor?" Talon asked. "No, it's to loud" "Whatever you say." He took his shotgun that was on his back. "EAT LEAD CLANKERS!" He shouted, shooting down the droids. Cck. BFOOM! Cck. BFOOM! Betin hopped out from behind the tree and fired. DEO DEO DEO DEO DEO! "Call in for backup" The commander, easily recognized by his yellow markings. "Roger ro-"The sargeant began but was blown to pieces by Talon. "Ha ha!" When all of the droids were down they looked around. About a mile away from them was a CIS outpost! "Fierfek, did you see that when we were falling?" Betin said. "Nope, it was to small. Plus I was falling back first," Talon replied, "Should we blow it, they probably know were here." "No, this is a search squad, see the blue markings on everyone but the commander?" Betin said, examining the droids. He looked back at the base. It seemed to be a comm tower. "We should probably get away from it. Soon enough some droids may come looking for this squad." "Oh, ok," replied Talon. As they walked further and further away, Betin felt like he was being watched. And yes he was.
BEEP BEEP BEEP! Kydeki instantly sat up from his sleep. His probe had obviously detected something. He saw Talon and Betin! They seemed to be walking away. He stood up and looked around but only saw the lush forest around him. Fierfek, I really need to get to that tower.... he thought.
Byron Ybarra, jedi padawan, followed his master, Josh Rakator through the swamps of Borgoron II. The walked silently untill they reached a small town on stilts right over the marsh. The crossed the rotten wood platform. He looked down at the marsh. He paused to gaze at the lotus flowers. "C'mon Byron, we've got a job to do," Josh said. That's right. He thought. The job. Josh and Byron was sent to Borgoron II to rendezvous with Theta Squad. They were going to the village to ask if they had seen them, for they had not been contacted. He strolled down the platform after his master. Josh was a do-it-by-the-book master. He was very humorous too. When they reached the village they were greeted well, rather strangely. The townspeople, wearing brownish grayish robes, started to crowd them. He noticed that they had gashes. They had them everywhere. Cheeks, knees, arms, everywhere. Even the women and children had them. "Master," Byron said,"Why do they have gashes?" "Somebody," Josh replied, "or something attacked them." A frown appeared on his scared face. "What would be so brutal?" Asked Byron. "Many things, swamp creatures, mandolorians, sith, droids...." Josh replied. Byron got nervous. "Droids?" "The new commando droids, made for lot's of things. Including interrogation." Josh looked around, "They have the ability to change their voices too. You can never be to safe with those around." "So why not just use them a lot?" Byron questioned. "It costs to much. The droids are more sophisticated. Now let's talk to them shall we?" Josh bent down to a man, "Who did this to you?" He asked. "Droids......mando....l..l..o"He started in a hoarse voice. But before he could finish, 3 commando droids and 3 mandolorians popped out from behind a hut, weapons blazing. Josh initiated his blue lightsaber. Byron drew his blue and green ones. They ran forward to the enemies. DEOW DEOW DEOW! Crimson lasers were flying everywhere. "You take the droids i'll take the mandos!" Josh ordered. Byron ran to a droid and sliced in half. Then the droids pulled out something unexpected. Vibro swords. Sithspit. Byron thought. He fought two of the droids. Meanwhile Josh was battling a mandolorian, for he killed the other. And the mando had a friggin lightsaber.
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« Reply #8 on: December 16, 2008, 11:11:01 PM » |
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osh ducked a precise swing thrown out be the mandolorian. The crimson red blade flew right above his head. He looked at his padawan, Byron Ybarra. He saw him stab the last droid and golden sparks flew out. The mandolorian, clad in blue armor, slashed at Josh. Josh rolled away and engaged the mandolorian in a battle. Then he heard it. He heard a thumping sound, like an army marching to battle. The sound came closer. He listened harder. The mandolorian had stopped attacking him, and was looking toward the directions of a sound. The noise seemed more like a clanking noise, of robotic appendages shifting. Then it hit him. Droids. He thought. He saw a battle droid emerge from the lush green bush a few feet from him. Then another, then another. That's about fifty. He summed up in his mine. Then a tall, dark gray figure appeared. A super battle droid. More emerged. The droids were already marching toward him. That's about twenty. The droids began to fire. Luckily, Josh was on the ground and Byron was standing behind a house, so they were untouched. “AUGHHH!” The mandolorian screamed as a few bolts hit him. The mandolorian fell to the ground. “Byron!” Josh shouted. “Yes master?!” Byron shouted back. “Go , get way from here,” he replied, “I'll hold the droids off.” He forced a few droids away and caused them to crash into there own allies. “But master...” Byron's voice faded away. “Go!” Byron ran as fast as he could. Soon, he was out of sight. Josh looked at the droids with determination in his eyes. Little did he know that this bold act would lead to a horrible result. “Let's bring it.”
Now your probably wondering about Darkranger, well, he fell on the ice side of the planet. You see, Borgoron is very unique, it has two sides, the jungle side and the snowy side. The Borgs had learned to adapt to it. The Borgs were a bit chameleon like, they could change the color their scales. Except the Borgs did it much faster, in a matter of seconds, the could be a dark blue but then a light green. Borgs had two arms, two feet, and a tail. They are scaly, have a triangle shaped head, and aposable thumbs. The scales were like armor, very strong. They weren't very advanced, for they used blades and arrows. However, their weapons were enhanced by some deep magic(what? If they have the force can't they have magic?) that made them more powerful. The tails had a mace-ball kind of end to it. They had pointy ears and eyes on the side of their heads. Anyway, they found Darkranger face flat in the snow. The Borgs picked him up, put him in a cart, and carried him to a camp. Now, fortunately for Darkranger, he was picked up by the right group. The Borgs were separated into clans, and Ranger was picked up by the main clan, the one the chancellor had talked to. So, they knew that Darkranger was good. Darkranger was laid in a tent. He was unconcious. He multiple bruises and a few medicine Borgs patched him up.
Darkranger woke up with a start. He was sitting in a leather tent. He was in his under armor, the black mesh that the armor plates connected to. He was lying in a soft bed. “I was wondering when you would wake up,” A hoarse voice croaked. Darkranger sat up. “You're from the republic aren't you?” Darkranger saw a figure sitting in a chair. He rubbed his eyes and his vision came into focus. He saw an old Borg sitting on a chair. He was not camoflauged and easily stood out from the coffee colored tent. He had a flowing beard and wisdom in his eyes. “You're......a borg?” Darkranger asked. “Yes, I am Todo Chubb-Hewlen, but you can call me Helwen.” “Ok, Helwen, where am I and what's going on?” Darkranger asked. “Oh my young one, that's a long story,” He sat down on a next to Darkranger.
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